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Komachi Gives Up on Being a Novelist!? (こまち小説家断念!? Komachi Shōsetsuka Dannen!??) is the 16th episode of the season Yes! Pretty Cure 5, and also the 161st episode of the Pretty Cure franchise overall.

Synopsis

After Natts gives Komachi some blunt criticism she decides to give up on writing.

Summary

Komachi reads her novel outloud for everyone and they seem to be impressed. Coco suggests she gives the book to Natts to read - since he enjoys reading books and did that a lot back at the Palmier Kingdom. Komachi asks him to read it and Natts agrees, changing into his human form and going off for a bit.

Later, he admits that he wasn't able to understand what she was trying to say in the book. If he is unable to understand it and needs the Author to explain everything - its worthless as a book. Komachi, on the verge of tears runs away from him after hearing this and Karen chases after her. Rin, Nozomi, and Urara give him a look for this.

Meanwhile, at Nightmare, Kawarino was scolding Bunbee and Arachnea, when Desperaia appeared on screen. She asked why are the Palmier kingdom citizens dreaming, and Bunbee explained that it is because of the Dream Collet. She said they can't dream without hope, and asks where the hope comes from, which Kawarino explains that it is because of Pretty Cure. Desperaia tells them to defeat Pretty Cure and crush their hopes.

Back at Natts House the girls continue to act rudely to Natts and scold him. He doesn't seem to care though and heads back to the main floor. Coco looks at his exiting figure before saying that Natts isn't the type to give compliments or lie, but he is sure deep down he feels bad for hurting Komachi. Natts asks what he should do, causing Coco to start teasing him and offers to help, but insists he does something on his own and Natts agrees.

Meanwhile, Karen tries to cheer up Komachi and claims to have loved the book. It doesn't seem to work though, and Komachi tells Karen to go home so that she doesn't keep Sakamoto waiting. Unknown to the girls Arachnea is watching.

The next day after School, the girls go back to Natts House when a female biker arrives. Natts is quick to scold her for making so much noise but she mentions being a customer, though he doesn't care. He refuses to be polite to someone who won't even show their face. After the biker admits that she was rude she removes her helmet, revealing herself to resemble a grown up Komachi. Nozomi points out that Komachi claimed she had stuff to do and went home and Karen approaches the girl before recognizing her as Madoka, Komachi's older sister. 

At home Komachi sits by herself when she notices a Pinky. She follows it when a shadow of a spider steps onto her novel.

Madoka informs everyone that she came because Komachi asked her to deliver Mamedaifuku from the store. Everyone compliments Komachi for being so kind and they chastise Natts by saying he could learn from her. Everyone starts to defend Komachi again after Madoka explains she isn't able to tolerate criticism, but she needs to learn to in order to to become a novelist. Before she goes, Natts asks for a favor.

He comes over to their home to speak with Komachi personally, with everyone else spying on them. He asks if she is still writing, and she said she isn't because she put all of her effort into writing this book - and if its bad, she has no talent at all. This angers Natts and he tells her that she doesn't value her dream at all. Everyone is quick to defend Komachi again and they scold Natts for being so rude, but they are interrupted after Arachnea uses her magic to transport everyone into Komachi's story. Arachnea then reveals herself and turns the pirate ship nearby into a Kowaina and the girls transform into Pretty Cure.

As they battle, they notice how depressed Mint is, due to what is happening to her story now. Natts encourages her by saying she shouldn't give up on her dream like this, since everyone makes mistakes. He tells her they can be fixed, and suddenly, the Kowaina attacks him and makes him drop the Dream Collet. Before Arachnea can attack him Mint comes to his defense, then with the aid of the others they defeat the Kowaina and chase away Arachnea, releasing them from the story.

Later, they return to her house and Natts tells her that the story needs a lot improvement - but he does like the main character. Komachi promises to work and fix it, and he promises to read her story when she's done.

Major Events

  • Natts is revealed to be an avid reader but has a hard time giving honest critique.
  • Akimoto Madoka, Komachi's elder sister, is introduced.
  • Natts gives Komachi sound advice to improve her novel, "Pirate Hurricane".
  • The power of Nightmare to transport the Cures into works of fiction is revealed with Arachnea teleporting them into Komachi's "Pirate Hurricane" novel.

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